From the past few decades, there has been found in wide diversity in foods. However, many of the regional foods are considered obsolete whereas international foods are in demand. As far as I am concerned to this issue, I reckon that the outbreak of junk food has brought significant adverse effect on each individual.
To kick off , there are plethora of reasons that witness this negative trend and it is no exaggeration to say that no age group is escaped from this unhealthy food. The primary reason for this is the cost effective as the prices of all instant foods are quite pocket friendly, people tend to binge on this food rather than suplurging money on traditional food. Moreover, the other reason of this domination belongs to social status. In fact, even if you are reluctantly having this food, you will either be considered outdated or uncouth. For example, people are more likely to dig on western cuisines and the people who have never developed their tastes on quick foods are usually badged poverty-stricken.
I cast no doubt that instant food is scrumptious but consumption of it has become a big threat to many people. Furthermore, most of the children are going obese and misshaped. The reason behind is the over hectic schedule of working parents. Nowadays , both parents are supposed to be working and they hardly get time to prepare food at home. Therefore , they prefer to order these foods online lest cook some instant noodles at home. For instance, maggi is the one of the easiest food to make and with no time. Additionally, all walks of people are well aware about the cooking techniques of Maggi so it is dominating the regional foods.
To recapitulate, according to above preceding discussion, it is apparent that people are evolving to these foods. Despite having haphazard consequences, people are constantly binging on these food items. As a result , many fatal diseases have come into existence . So i urge to Government to spread awareness in public so this unhealthy trend can be curbed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, i reckon, in fact, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93274853801 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73288510196 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9199928572 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7894736842 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26315789474 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284674941996 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079697576874 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730021799825 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166329969191 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656341942607 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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