Your friend is looking for a new job. Write a letter to him referring a new job. Include the following:
1) Describe the details of the job?
2) Why is it suitable for him?
3) How to apply for the job?
Dear Joel
I hope that you are doing fine. I thought about you yesterday while I was checking my Linkedin page. One of my former colleagues is currently looking to fill up a vacancy in his current company. He is looking to hire an experienced IT engineer with proven knowledge in programming and web design. This position it's based in downtown central. Working nine to five, Mondays to Fridays.
As soon as I finished reading the offer I instantly think that you were a perfect fit for this position. As I recall you had extensive experience in programming and web designing. Also, you had an impressive resume throughout your career because of your work ethics. I will blindly recommend you for this job. So if you need any references don't hesitate to put me in your resume.
I did send you an email with the information on how to apply for this job. First of all, you will have to create a username and password. Secondly, you will have to fill-up the form with your data and upload an updated resume. Finally, you will be asked to accept the terms and submit the application.
My friend, I would love to hear from you soon. Good luck
Carlos
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 236, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
...He is looking to hire an experienced IT engineer with proven knowledge in programming an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 311, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill blindly recommend you for this job. So if you need any references dont hesitate t...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...this job. So if you need any references dont hesitate to put me in your resume. ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 114, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... First of all, you will have to create a username and password. Secondly, you wi...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5845410628 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56107911514 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647342995169 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7195260694 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.8235294118 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1764705882 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127833990214 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433536639767 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767343155135 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0732677546317 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052339152969 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.