Dear John,
It has been a long time since we met last time, hope you are fine and your family in a good health. I just received your letter saying that you are going to start the process of taking a driving license in my city next month while you are attending your training course here in that month and you are asking for my advice in this matter.
Nowadays, it is important for any body to have a driving license especially for who is working in the sales jobs. As I remember that your major is in the marketing field and you are going to work with your father in the sales. So, in my opinion getting a driving license will help you in your life in general and will save your money for employing a driver for you as you are going to work in your father’s company.
However, the best school in our city is called “GO” and you are going to take the theoretical and the practical lessons at the same time and you will be able to drive a car inside this school. The cost of this school is low comparing with other schools here and you can take your lessons either in the morning or in the evening as you like. But, you are required to register in their website one week earlier “www.Go.com”and attached a copy from your ID card. Don’t worry about the process of their payment, you can do that in cash once you start your lessons.
If you need any further help in this, let me know my dear friend.
Yours sincerely,
Jwan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anybody'?
Suggestion: anybody
...tter. Nowadays, it is important for any body to have a driving license especially fo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 273.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36996336996 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52615562656 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.011975252 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.454545455 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 16.8248392259 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189311225074 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882652073602 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414332739973 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123221442835 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450170197584 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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