Dear John,
Hey buddy, I hope you are doing well over there. Lately I have been busy with finals, so I did not have time to contact you. Recently I heard that you were talking about getting a driver license. Driving license is a huge advantageous, especially in America these day. You can finally have your own freedom, you can go basically anywhere at any time without having to rely on anyone. Having a car on your own can seriously save you a lot on travelling fee, you will not have to spend so much on taxi. Next time, we might be able to go on expedition together.
Picking what driving school you want to enter might be a huge task, but do not worry buddy cause I got you covered. There is this really good driving school called "Landslide" up on Sunny Street that overlook a library near you. Their instructors are friendly and professional, they always know ways to make you feel relaxed so you do not have to feel stress. Their facility is well-equipped, and their practice ranges are huge and well verse.
Although the school offer practice cars, it is quite pricey to actually rent one and practice regularly. So I suggest you coming here and we can use my car to practice instead. I know quite a few tricks on my own when it come to safe driving, like how you have to honk regularly while driving in the suburb because of animal crossing. And also, if you ever think of going car-shopping, make sure you choose a big car instead. Smaller cars are not convenience, and the lower fuel consumption can't make up for it. I am looking forward to your success.
Best Regards,
Jerry
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- Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies factories and their employees to the countryside Do you agree or disagree 82
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John, Hey buddy, I hope youre doing well over there. Lately I have be...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...tely I have been busy with finals, so I didnt have time to contact you. Recently I he...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...uge advantageous, especially in America these day. You can finally have your own freedom,...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...want to enter might be a huge task, but dont worry buddy cause I got you covered. Th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...nt worry buddy cause I got you covered. Theres this really good driving school called ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ow ways to make you feel relaxed so you dont have to feel stress. Their facility is ...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...ow quite a few tricks on my own when it come to safe driving, like how you have to h...
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Line 7, column 339, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...suburb because of animal crossing. They dont teach these things at school, I guarant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, look, really, so, well, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 937.175257732 153% => OK
No of words: 307.0 206.0 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67426710098 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6590420694 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 127.690721649 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644951140065 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2732732444 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5263157895 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1578947368 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11382040233 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375788402529 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395226715179 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793486208255 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00269726498358 0.0580467560999 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.