Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend.
- Say why a driving license is advantageous
- Recommend a driving school
- Give extra guidance/ tips
Dear Albert
I am glad to hear that you have decided to learn driving. The idea of learning to drive will definitely change your life.
But firstly, you need to have driving license which can be a way round to remove all the restrictions to drive anywhere with freedom. You will be independent in handling routine tasks for instance office, shopping etc. Moreover it is a social and legal responsibility of being an ideal citizen.
Secondly, you need to search a good driving school with supportive & experience instructors. I would like to recommend the Hall Driving School in the down town. I, myself, have learnt from this renowned driving school. All the instructors are well trained and experienced professionals. The medium of instructions include both theoretical as well as practical aspects. Moreover, you will also learn the traffic rules as well which are the foremost important in today’s life.
To become proficient in all aspects you have to appear for an exam to test you knowledge of driving before obtaining license. I think, a two –week course will be sufficient for you to be perfect and clear the driving trust.
I hope my advice will serve the purpose. Looking forward to hear from you.
Love,
Robert
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... to hear that you have decided to learn driving. The idea of learning to drive will def...
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Line 15, column 340, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...f instructions include both theoretical as well as practical aspects. Moreover, you will a...
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Line 23, column 58, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...will serve the purpose. Looking forward to hear from you. Love, Robert
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i think, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1359223301 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77780718321 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635922330097 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9896656161 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5333333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7333333333 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200058110207 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692999574541 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857594263736 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110214555973 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663253093167 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.