Your friend wants to come to your city and stay with you for one week for a holiday. However, it is impossible for you to accompany him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should;
• apologise to your friend
• explain why you cannot stay with him
• suggest an alternative plan for the holiday
Dear Thompson
I am doing well and hope that you are also sailing on the same boat. I came to know that you have planned to visit Shimla to spend your vacations at the start of next month. I am pleased that you want to spend a quality time with me by staying at my place during your visit to my city. But, sorry to say, I will not be available at home at the time of your arrival.
I am going to Bangalore due to business requirement for fifteen days next month. It will not be possible for me to stay with you during your trip. I was very happy when I read your letter that you are coming to live at my home with your family and we will be meeting after three years. But, all of my excitement got ruined when I received an e-mail from my manager for a business trip coming month.
You should not worry about your stay. You can live at my place with my parents, they will be overwhelmed seeing you after long time. Otherwise, if possible, could you change your plan and come a few days earlier than your planned journey.
Appolozise once again. Waiting for your response!!!!!!!!!!
Yours truly
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r vacations at the start of next month. I am pleased that you want to spend a qua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29691699119 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0107826256 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1538461538 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412075164382 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174995474148 0.0766984524023 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120176805822 0.0603063233224 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268990718445 0.12726935374 211% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562739918441 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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