More and more people use private cars instead of taking public transport. What are the reasons for this trend? How can the government encourage people to take public transport?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Every country whether they are developed, developing or under-developing, is facing some environmental issues. The main problem that nations are suffering from is pollution and one of the predominant reason for the contribution of pollution is excessive use of private cars by the people rather than public vehicles. In following paragraphs, I am going to describe about various causes of this activity and what can official bodies do to inspire public to use public transports.
In this modern era, people are earning huge amount of money and they spend their wealth on buying luxurious cars. Nowadays, every house is having as many cars as number of family members. Every member uses his/her own vehicle when they have to go out. Due to the availability of personal vehicles, individuals do not prefer to travel by public transports because they find it comfortable by travelling on their own four wheeler. Not only comfort but also an another reason of using their own transports is show-off. In order to show the living standard to the society, people use their own vehicles so even if they have to go to the market which is at walk-able distance, they use car.
So, government has to take effective measures that people start using public transports, for example, they should enforce laws like each family should keep only one four wheeler. Furthermore, official bodies should organise camps to aware public about the issues that the society is facing due to the use of personal cars at extreme rate, to illustrate, excessive consumption of fossil fuels, increase in pollution etcetera. Besides that, government should reduce the fares of public transports, provide enough vehicles that people do not have to wait and can travel comfortably.
In conclusion, I would like to say that in today's era, there are several issues that arises due to the great use of private transports rather than public vehicles. It should not only the responsibility of the government but people should also come forward and reduce the use of cars in order to save environment as well as nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 421, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...ortable by travelling on their own four wheeler. Not only comfort but also an another r...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a reason' or 'another reason'.
Suggestion: a reason; another reason
...four wheeler. Not only comfort but also an another reason of using their own transports is show-o...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'wheeler' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'wheelers'.
Suggestion: wheelers
...e each family should keep only one four wheeler. Furthermore, official bodies should or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05217391304 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74516473578 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9234107286 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6428571429 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269349940412 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936571944404 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549401608199 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170438193906 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303737959319 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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