Dear Jane,
How are you? it's been quite a time since we met. But this latter would let you know how cheerful and blissful I am feeling owing to the stay of your little angels at my house next weekend.
Well, to be honest, I will certainly not be having any problem regarding this stay. Moreover, you would be able to concentrate more on your business meeting, as Lara and suli will be safe with me.
That being said you could drop them at the bus station on Saturday morning and I will be on the time there to pick them up.
In order to make this weekend memorable, I'm planning to have a zoo visit with children. After that, we will enjoy the pool party organized by a cool club at the walking distance from my home, and will taste the new continental breakfast at Sunday.
Can't wait to be with your innocent kids after so long. Safe travel.
Lots of love,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Jane, How are you? its been quite a time sinc...
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Suggestion: Its
Dear Jane, How are you? its been quite a time since we met. But th...
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... But this latter would let you know how cheerful and blissful I am feeling owing...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se next weekend. Well, to be honest, I will certainly not be having any probl...
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Suggestion:
...ncentrate more on your business meeting, as Lara and suli will be safe with me. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...n order to make this weekend memorable, Im planning to have a zoo visit with child...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: Can't; Cannot
...new continental breakfast at Sunday. Cant wait to be with your innocent kids afte...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r so long. Safe travel. Lots of love, Mark
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, regarding, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37804878049 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13578334429 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701219512195 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0978109626 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.8 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134727582962 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507388264512 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434171191918 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745831639885 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405967115323 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.