1. Some people believe that technology has made man more sociable and others think that it has made us less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
technology has become an integral part of livelihood in this catastrophic scenario. it has given birth to a controversial issue in which some people claim that it eliminates boundaries in order to make men more companionable, but others have a belief that it cuts the relationship of person from this society and makes him introvert. However, I agree with the former statement, and will discuss the both sides of given question.
Undoubtedly, the enormous facilities provided by technology are continuously easing the communication barriers, globally. human beings does not only have an access to find and talk with their domestic peers, but it also allows them to make friends over the seas. With just a single click message can be sent instantly to the receiver, people have an opportunity to make friends in every book and cranny of the world, they exchange their thoughts, experience the varied cultures as well. Facebook, a popular social networking website, is an epitome here. One can find a loaded of chances to connect with other people by using it, make relations with them, having them in their friend list. Thus,technology has been paved the way of making people more sociable.
The individuals, on the other side, who are not agree with the above view, think that the advancement of technology makes people introvert . Why they are saying like this? May be, people from all ages glue themselves in the front of the computer or mobile screens for pro -long period, resulting they do not remain in the connection of their close friend circle physically, even the family members can be seen on the dining table with their electronic gadgets, having no conversation with each other. Therefore, technology worsens the relationship, leaving people into their introvert atmosphere, lessening the face to face communication, which all together makes people less cordial.
In conclusion, the exploration of several ideas has pointed out the technology's benefits and drawbacks in making the men sociable. I personally have a concern that technology removes the geographical boundaries , humans are becoming more genial by using it provided that its usage should be in good menace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21246458924 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87861138248 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606232294618 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4771488598 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132332584594 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508130761455 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442648312548 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860795382543 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272312481406 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.