Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say.
-Agree to this arrangement
-say what time is suitable for you.
-Say what you are planning to do
Dear Aman,
I am writing this missive in response to your epistle which I received yesterday . I would love to have a gia and Priya over for the weekend. I eagerly wait for the time when they will come here, as you know how much I love children .
These days ,I am on morning shift ,so you can drop both of them any time after 1pm. Let me know their favourite dishes .so that I can prepare them in advance and then spend all time with them to perpetuate.
I have planned many things for them. Firstly, there is a fun island which is a esteemed fun park in my area, where there are many rides for children .Next days,I will take them to punjabi haveli where they can come to know about their punjabi culture as well as tradition.
Hoping to see them soon
Yours lovingly,
Ashwin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Aman, I am writing this missive in response to...
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Line 4, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... your epistle which I received yesterday . I would love to have a gia and Priya ov...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e a gia and Priya over for the weekend. I eagerly wait for the time when they wil...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...re, as you know how much I love children . These days ,I am on morning shift ,s...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...how much I love children . These days ,I am on morning shift ,so you can drop b...
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Line 6, column 34, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n . These days ,I am on morning shift ,so you can drop both of them any time af...
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Line 6, column 119, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... 1pm. Let me know their favourite dishes .so that I can prepare them in advance an...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...Firstly, there is a fun island which is a esteemed fun park in my area, where the...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... where there are many rides for children .Next days,I will take them to punjabi ha...
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Line 9, column 151, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Next
...here there are many rides for children .Next days,I will take them to punjabi haveli...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...e are many rides for children .Next days,I will take them to punjabi haveli where ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 651.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39864864865 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0550317651 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682432432432 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4645993316 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.375 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151213308537 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740497573343 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347288873743 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760463633611 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705997599816 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.