In your letter, you should:
• describe why you want to work in that country
• tell him/her about your skills and experience
• ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)
One of your friends lives in another country. You want to spend some time working in that country. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should:
• describe why you want to work in that country
• tell him/her about your skills and experience
• ask some questions related to work (e.g. wage/salary)
Hello, John,
I hope this letter finds you well!. Even though it's been a long time when we last met, I still have refreshing memories with you. I want to tell you that I'm planning to work in your neighboring city, Vancouver and I'll move there next month.
As you know, I've been working in India since 2018 in the same company. I feel so boring here, so I just want to work in your country to have a fresh atmosphere. Besides, Canada has a myriad of big companies, where I can excel in my skills and capabilities. Also, I'd get a chance to in contact with you and spend some good time.
Being a Software Tester having four years of experience in the industry , I'm good at testing strategies, hands-on creating test scenarios, and writing test cases. In addition, I recently completed my part MBA, making me suitable for a contemporary business-oriented world.
Last but not the least, could you please tell me about the salary that a software tester can earn in your country, and is it easy to find job opportunities over there? If you have any friends working in this industry, please let me know so that I can get some clarity from them.
See you soon!
With Love
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...to work e.g. wage/salary Hello, John, I hope this letter finds you well!. Even...
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Suggestion: I'm
...ories with you. I want to tell you that Im planning to work in your neighboring ci...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...in your neighboring city, Vancouver and Ill move there next month. As you know, Iv...
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...ll move there next month. As you know, Ive been working in India since 2018 in the...
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Suggestion: I'd
...el in my skills and capabilities. Also, Id get a chance to in contact with you and...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'gets'.
Suggestion: gets
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...four years of experience in the industry , Im good at testing strategies, hands-on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, e.g., if, so, still, well, i feel, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1228.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56505576208 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5260671189 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594795539033 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5532989691 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55175326624 0.216113520407 255% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166135768913 0.0766984524023 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198919603048 0.0603063233224 330% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300828023797 0.12726935374 236% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141987373157 0.0580467560999 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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