Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people.
Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail
-Suggest a speaker
-say what they would contribute to the event
-explain why other people would be interested too
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter in regards to your recent publish to recommend a guest speaker. I understand the event is organized in the benefit of a charity, so the intention is to have more number of audiences.
Hence I would suggest ‘Mr.Nanjilnadan’ as a guest speaker for this event. He is a renowned Speaker, novelist and a revolutionist. He could deliver a speech about the existence of Western foods in India over the traditional or conventional foods, a modern youth against the traditional youth etc. He is very impressive with our tradition and culture.
Certainly, his presence would enhance the events significance as his speeches have acclaimed many appreciations from Tamil scholars. Furthermore he had won this year’s “BEST EVENT SPEAKER” award from Rotary Club of Chennai North. Hence he would be the most appropriate choice for this occasion persuading people to register for the event in advance.
I hope my suggestion would be considered. Thanks.
Yours Truly,
Ram Narayan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-09-11 | drmona.914 | 73 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...Sir/ Madam, I am writing this letter in regards to your recent publish to recommend a gues...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...is to have more number of audiences. Hence I would suggest 'Mr.Nanjilnadan&ap...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nanjilnadan&apos
...nces. Hence I would suggest 'Mr.Nanjilnadan' as a guest speaker for this event. He ...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'events'' or 'event's'?
Suggestion: events'; event's
...rtainly, his presence would enhance the events significance as his speeches have accla...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...many appreciations from Tamil scholars. Furthermore he had won this year's 'BEST ...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '; the BEST'.
Suggestion: ; the BEST
...ermore he had won this year's 'BEST EVENT SPEAKER' award from Rotary C...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ward from Rotary Club of Chennai North. Hence he would be the most appropriate choice...
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Discourse Markers used:
['furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.313131313131 0.220444632235 142% => OK
Verbs: 0.121212121212 0.167888034529 72% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0606060606061 0.0606518309736 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.020202020202 0.0506257000042 40% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0707070707071 0.118615021944 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106060606061 0.107062808482 99% => OK
Participles: 0.030303030303 0.041066498444 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.44578560411 2.54303337028 135% => OK
Infinitives: 0.020202020202 0.0385302599488 52% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10101010101 0.0714148451538 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252525252525 0.0191574576366 132% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1045.0 1141.60824742 92% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.134020619 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.37195121951 5.53046319177 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78085437643 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.390243902439 0.284621296913 137% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30487804878 0.211203875043 144% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231707317073 0.133321485273 174% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158536585366 0.0843313296314 188% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 3.44578560411 2.54303337028 135% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676829268293 0.622163163488 109% => OK
Word variations: 69.1499629019 62.8969750728 110% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6666666667 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6724448899 44.7399317507 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0833333333 90.9928171075 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.613754768223 54% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.09278350515 334% => OK
Readability: 44.1544715447 37.5504026743 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.11904761905 1.13073093955 187% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289928603569 0.331212695627 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0435088114189 0.0927372745006 47% => Sentence sentence coherence is low.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0391530464453 0.0736520305886 53% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.516756736155 0.579516596996 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169126465577 0.180689518051 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090807712323 0.122183219658 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774565863235 0.0765303033291 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.188426806977 0.211926503985 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0892515840378 0.0737400523855 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169583993163 0.203819188451 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995493363987 0.067151250289 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.