Dear Jay,
I hope everything is great at your end. I got extremely happy when I heard the news regarding the uocoming program that your bookshop is going to arrange and you are looking for some guest speaker as well.
Let me give you some suggestions. Recently I have came in contact of one of the oldest freedom fighter of our country. His name is Mr Ram and he has fought for our country's independence for more than 15 years. Even after we got our independence, he had continued to work for betterment of societyfor longest time.
As your event's primary goal is to educate people regarding history and patriotic movements that are done by our fighters, I think he will be the best person to guide people about that.
Apart from all these, I have seen so many people who want to indulge themselves in some of the other social activities but could not find proper direction, this lecture will channelise their energy in proper direction. That is how more and more people will be intrested in your event.
I can't wait to hear from you.
Your friend,
Monali
- Some people believe that climate change has the greatest effect on people s way of life Others believe the economy of the region has the greatest effect Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Some people get into debt by buying things they don t need and can t afford What are reasons for these behaviors What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem 61
- Write a letter to your friend your friend son is going to your country for his holiday she wants him to stay in your home But you cant accommodate him Write a letter for your friend Apology for your friend Explain why he cant stay in your home give he 61
- The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 56
- Some people prefer to live in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'come'.
Suggestion: come
...e you some suggestions. Recently I have came in contact of one of the oldest freedom...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societyfor the longest'.
Suggestion: societyfor the longest
...had continued to work for betterment of societyfor longest time. As your events primary goal is...
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Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...eople who want to indulge themselves in some of the other social activities but could not f...
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Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e will be intrested in your event. I cant wait to hear from you. Your friend, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, regarding, so, well, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67368421053 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47446796095 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678947368421 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5595640468 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7272727273 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185618045797 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646028351897 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551409666858 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0915154316958 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575223310443 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.