Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that runs indoor to save money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter,
1. Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
2. Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community.
3. Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear sir/ Madam,
This is with reference to a crucial decision taken by our local council during the general body meeting conducted by last month, towards closing down our much utilized sports and leisure centre citing the maintenance concern.
We, herewith would like to bring to your notice various positive aspects contributed by the presence of this centre and why the idea to demolish the building need to be thought over again. The matter of the fact that the centre is extensively utilized by all the community people including my family and friends cannot be just ruled out. Apart from the sports activity, various other entertainment programmes including cultural activities are being conducted at our centre which gives a zeal of enthusiasm and happiness to the people of society. Hence, building a uniformity and coordination among the community.
Moreover, this being self-financed centre, with the income gained from the conducted programme through outsourcing, we manage to gain profit in terms of money collection which is fully utilized in the welfare activities of our society and common amenities.
We foresee that in event of closure of the centre, the people shall not be motivated toward building their child’s and their own capacity towards the sports and other extra-curricular activities like arts. Also other community centres are either too costly or not approachable easily. Eventually, the society shall never be happening as before with low enthusiasm among the local people.
Considering to all the above facts, I request you to once again discuss on this matter prior to finalization of your decision to avert regretting later. We are expecting a positive approach and support from you.
Thanks and regards,
Umesh nair
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, apart from, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 937.175257732 160% => OK
No of words: 279.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36917562724 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78554815598 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598566308244 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.5293607418 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171191724758 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051493959018 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387228932747 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890825346461 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397644400225 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 8.37731958763 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 8.71597938144 162% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.