Now a days many children are participating in reality shows conducted by different channels in T.V. Some approve of this, others are opposing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s entertainment and advertising world, reality shows have undoubtedly become the most interesting and enjoyed programme across every television network. Not only for adults but the platform is open for children as well, which is turning out to be high craze for the children of any age. Though it is really good to extract the hidden talents of a child, there are certain instances which advise us to limit the popularity of such reality shows hence the opposition.
In the earlier days, when theatres where the only platform for the entertainment, the talent of the children were showcased through it. But it was not able to reach the masses. But with extent of approach and openness of the current reality shows, it has become very easy for a child express and shows his talent in various forms of arts other than music and dance. Also the children learn to face a large audience which altogether boost up their confidence and inner ability to take up any kind of challenge in future. The main advantage is that a child’s talent reaches across the nation along with winning various prizes and scholarships which benefit them for their future prospective as well as to identify their preferable area of work.
However, there are indeed various limitations too when we discuss on certain cases of failure and mismanagement from the authorities among the participating students. It has to be understood by the parents as well as the participating students that after all their reality shows are more of a business to the television networks for increasing their finances and popularity. Hence they do not have any sentiments for children participating and focus more on encashment of their talent and feelings. This usually hurts the children as they are not mature enough to understand this and create a stress in their minds leading to mental disorders, academic failure and taking dangerous life threatening steps. This becomes the main reason towards opposing such reality shows.
To conclude with my opinion, I am of the view that reality shows are working wonders to bring out the hidden talent of a child and also reach far to the unapproachable lands to offer popularity to unknown figures. The evil intentions of the programme makers have to be suitably understood by the parents of child and suitably managed to avert disorders of any kind on child’s health and commitment. This can be fulfilled more easily rather than limiting the exploration of talent of children for their better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2117.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05250596659 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77555268975 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517899761337 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9336271534 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.3125 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1875 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138837688307 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489441533052 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294339283678 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912467691983 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305547911202 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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