Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, on order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
-give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
-explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
-describe the possible effects on the local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to draw your attention at the importance of sports and leisure centre, which is widely used by my friends and family members. Even I prefer to walk in it every morning. Apart from this, my grandparents walk there in the evening time with their friends. Also, my friends usually play outdoor games and enjoy their leisure time there.
Nevertheless, the sports and leisure centre is equally important for our society and local community. Most importantly, it plays a vital role in building good relationships between neighbors. In addition to that, it helps us to promote our culture and maintain a good health by walking there. People will have to travel to other locations for playing games.
If it would be closed in the future then it would be hard for people to do all these activities, which are important for the good health. They will not be able to walk in the morning time and it will become difficult for them to keep themselves fit and healthy. Children will not have proper place to play games and they will have to stay at home instead.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Matt Henry
- Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town Write a letter to the mayor In your letter introduce yourself explain 95
- You have a pen friend living abroad. He is interested to learn about the major news items in your country. Briefly describe any piece of news that is being broadcast on TV and reasons why you are interested to share this news with him.- Say how you feel w 67
- Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community Write a letter to the newspaper editor In your letter suggest someone you think should receive the award describe what the person does to help the community suggest an awar 64
- A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town.Write a letter to the mayor. In your letterintroduce yourselfexplain 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, nevertheless, so, then, apart from, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72596153846 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48165886702 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3622002582 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6153846154 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120859728048 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441710849231 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673251966969 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585942553025 0.12726935374 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435553372416 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.