Your local council is considering closing a sports & leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
• Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre is closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing today to share my concerns regarding the Lex community centre, and the impact it would have on the neighbours.
Let me share my belief in brief. The community centre is situated near the lake, accessible from almost any part of the locality. It’s currently being used for various cultural and social activities, apart from the sports and games being played being followed here. The centre has given many athletes, sportsman, cyclist and swimmers a stage to practise and in favour, bring medals and honour for the nation.
As a remedy, and because I comprehend the necessity of this, for everyone in and around the society, I suggest that funding can partially be contributed by the members utilising the services. A permanent shut down might have an adverse effect in the mind of the natives living nearby.
Thank you for your kind consideration.
Yours truly,
Abhishek Berry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so, apart from, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61277728708 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.725490196078 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2142851439 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0978120562044 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441557232698 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509321675967 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0525394275433 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578911227529 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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