Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
• describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
DEAR SIR,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER REGARDING YOUR ABSURD DECISION TO SHUT DOWN THE SPORTS AND LEISURE CENTER. I WAS EXTREMELY DISAPPOINTED TO KNOW ABOUT THE UNCERTAINTY AND WOULD LIKE YOU KNOW OUR VIEWS ABOUT THE SAME,
I WASN’T A FITNESS PERSON EARLIER. HOWEVER, WITH THE INTRODUCTION OF CLUB IN OUR SOCIETY, IT CHANGED ME, MY FAMILY MEMBERS AND NEIGHBORS ATTITUDE TO A GREATER EXTENT. WE HAD STARTED LEARNING AND PRACTICING ONE OF THE ACTIVITIES. WE USED TO SPEND ALMOST AN HOUR EVERYDAY INDULGING IN LEISURES DOWNSTAIRS.
AS A RESULT OF THIS, WE COULD SEE A DRASTIC CHANGE IN THE QUALITY OF OUR HEALTHY. IT WAS NOT ONLY HELPING US TO STAY FIT BUT ALSO ACTING AS REFRESHMENT. FURTHERMORE, THIS PLACE ALSO HELPED US TO MEET OUR SOCIETY MEMBERS AND SOCIALISE WITH THEM. IN FACT, THE CENTER HAD BECOME AN AID TO CONNECT PEOPLE. THEREFORE, I BELIEVE CLOSURE OF IT WILL AFFECT OUR LIFESTYLE AS WELL AS SOCIAL LIFE. VANDALISING THE EASE THAT HAD PROVIDED TO STAY HEALTHY WOULD AFFECT THE MEMBERS DRASTICALLY.
I BELIEVE THERE MAY BE SOME LOGICAL REASONS FOR SUCH ABRUPT DECISION. NEVERTHELESS, A PROBLEM SHARED ISP PROBLEM HALVED. IN OTHER WORDS, YOU CAN CONDUCT A MEETING ALONGWITH THE CLUB MEMBERS TO ADDRESS THE TROUBLESOME SITUATION. AS A RESULT OF THIS, MAY BE WE COULD FIND WAY OUT OBSTRUCT THE INRORDINANCE. I HOPE YOU WILL TAKE MY SUGGESTION INTO CONSIDERATIONS AND WORK UPON IT.
YOURS FAITHFULLY,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
DEAR SIR, I AM WRITING THIS LETTE...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...KE YOU KNOW OUR VIEWS ABOUT THE SAME, I WASN'T A FITNESS PERSON EARLIER. H...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...VITIES. WE USED TO SPEND ALMOST AN HOUR EVERYDAY INDULGING IN LEISURES DOWNSTAIRS. AS...
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Line 9, column 250, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...BLESOME SITUATION. AS A RESULT OF THIS, MAY BE WE COULD FIND WAY OUT OBSTRUCT THE INRO...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...WORK UPON IT. YOURS FAITHFULLY,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact, you know, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.025 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85963284357 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4939440545 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.375 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 4.34317383033 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850111886231 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298373649082 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593283042103 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495428932167 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543928182177 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 41.2886597938 203% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.