Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write your own addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my unhappiness because of your consideration to close sports and leisure centre which is located near to our apartment.
Let me explain the situation in more detail. This sports club is a vital place for our residents, most of them are a member of this centre for last few years. Me and my friends actively using the tennis court in daily basis. Furthermore, my kid practice basket ball with his friends every evening. Moreover, meeting hall widely used by our tenants for celebrations and board meetings. This is the only club located in our area and the center place to connect people. It is important to continue the service, otherwise there is a chance where people from this location might move to different place. Physical activities are good to lead a healthy life, we are left with only this center to spend our free time to do exercise, also for social gathering. By closing this will bring adverse results in health such as obesity. Please reconsider our requests to continue the service.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon,
Yours faithfully,
Sreenivasan M
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5637488488 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682291666667 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5218454888 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130864138628 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458444198522 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053245864007 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975549627314 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726619101158 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.