your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
2- explain why the center is important for the local comunity
3- describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing regarding your decision of closing the sports center in our vicinity in order to save its running expenditure from your budget.
My friends, family and I were regularly pending a lot of time at the center to practice our favorite sports during the weekends. I personally returned to play football matches with many friends. There are many centers outside the city, but I cannot assure to continue in these activities if this nearest center closed.
The importance of the center comes from gathering many people at same place to do their sports activity and get knowing each other for more socialization. Although people were not practicing any sports, many people used to practice sports when it opened.
As result of closing the center, high rate of obesity will be measured among inhabitants. I would therefore stress that center shut down harms the health of individuals, especially the eldest. In addition to life socialization will be dramatically decreased in the vicinity.
I look forward to withdrawing that decision at soonest.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25139664804 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78236969133 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.692737430168 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.950589317 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215806946007 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744189648107 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761841409226 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105300334136 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100154078794 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.