Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing, with reference to your advertisement on unpaid workers at Sunday Observer on 30th December.
I’m S.P. Rathnayake who is studying in University Of Colombo academic year 2012- 2015 as nursery student. I take pleasure in working in your hospital as a voluntary worker. As I like to help to the disabled people moreover this is more fascinating experience for my career development. And also I’m much interested in charity works and specially I like to serve to the people in our area.
On the other hand I’ll be able to do any type of work in your hospital such as...
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- Your local hospital has advertised for people to help to do unpaid work helping at the hospital You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time Write a letter to the hospital In your letter Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at 88
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Dear Sir,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the advertisement given in the local newspaper for volunteering in the hospital. I would like to inform you that I have an acute interest in doing this.
This unpaid work I wanted to do because helping needy people always satiate me and at the same time I am ardent about it. As aptly said, "Helping others is a Life". Additionally, I am doing MBBS and can help in the hospital providing medication to the patients. Also, I am experienced in injecting medication which can definitely be helping hand to the doctors in the hospital. I can also give an awareness session with respect to contagious diseases which will eventually help people to be more healthy.
I can be available during weekends from noon to 7:00 pm evening, you can drop me an e-mail at vipina@GMAIL.COM or contact at +91-8080581008.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully
Vipin Ahuja
as nursery student
as a nursery student
this is more fascinating experience
this is a very fascinating experience
is more convenient place for me.
is a convenient place for me.
I much obliged
I am very obliged
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