Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor, say
-suggest someone you think should receive the award
- describe what the person does to help the community
- suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to recommend you the best choice for the precious award, named “Star of the community 2018”, on behalf of all residents living in GoVap district.
Being a loyal reader of Youth Magazine, I have known that your newspaper is nominating individuals who contributed remarkably to the community projects, such as: green environment campaign, save children project...Meeting these criteria, I would like to suggest Ms. Ha as the best choice for this nomination because of her dynamic charity activities as well as well-known educational projects conducted in this year.
To be more precise, in 2018, Ms. Ha donated nearly VND 2 billion, a huge amount of money, to build a new state-of-the-art library, equipped with modern facilities, consisting of 20 laptops and 50 ipads, and stored thousands of intriguing books, serving free for adolescents. Moreover, she has operated charity trips monthly to secluded areas to supply necessaries for poor families. What’s more, her success in business set a role model for youngsters about the determination and non-stop effort.
I totally believe that this award is an proper reward for her contribution, and be considered as official recognition to express our respect and gratitude to her warm heart.
Once again, I recommend that Ms. Ha would be a best choice for the nomination “ Star of the Community 2018”.
Yours faithfully,
Thuan.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-21 | Thuan Hoang | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Meeting
...nment campaign, save children project...Meeting these criteria, I would like to suggest...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... I totally believe that this award is an proper reward for her contribution, and...
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Line 11, column 46, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...again, I recommend that Ms. Ha would be a best choice for the nomination ' S...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 227.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40088105727 4.54256449028 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15915243924 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691629955947 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 112.400442059 44.8134815571 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.25 76.5299724578 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.375 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149402834599 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585551789131 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371752331075 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787888604473 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358175103193 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 8.71597938144 165% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 7.59969072165 138% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 41.2886597938 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 8.62886597938 238% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.