Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
My name is Carron, and I am writing this letter to let you know that there is a person who has a deep contribution in developing and structuring the society, so I would like you to nominate his name for an award which you advertised in Dawn newspaper on 12th of August 2019.
His name is John, and he is a generous and gold-hearted person because of his kind behaviour and sacrifices of his almost entire life to serve and protect humanity by providing shelters to orphans, food to needy people, medical aid and education to the poor.
One of his legacies is to build a community centre where people go and ask for help to resolve their issues and recently when an old lady in my neighbourhood was suffering from starvation for many days, he straightaway provided meals, medical help and moral support to that lady and ensure her that he was going to look after her that she would not suffer from the same problem again.
I would like you to nominate his name for a humanitarian award which is specifically for those who assist the nation all the time and want to promote the love and kindness among people.
I hope you will express your views in my advice.
Yours sincerely,
Carron
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d was suffering from starvation for many days, he straightaway provided meals, me...
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Suggestion: .
...uld suffer from the same problem again. . i would like you to nominate his na...
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Suggestion: I
...ffer from the same problem again. . i would like you to nominate his name for...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ffer from the same problem again. . i would like you to nominate his name for...
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Line 9, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifically for those who assist the nation all the time and want to promote the lov...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...iews in my advice. Yours sincerely,. Carron
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62962962963 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56712223857 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615740740741 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 16.3608247423 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 129.354057618 44.8134815571 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 200.0 76.5299724578 261% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.2 16.8248392259 257% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210330237246 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107045231778 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573706430852 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103220203036 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636524437699 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.0 8.37731958763 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 7.45979381443 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 8.54432989691 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.