Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to, your initiative to offer award to people who have helped the community. I believe my friend Rahul is a deserving candidate of this award. Since, he has been helping in various ways from many years.
To start with, he regularly organizes beach cleaning drives. These initiatives brings a lot many people together and with his leadership, all of these drives becomes a huge success. Additionally, he frequently offers help to traffic police to resolve traffic congestions during peak hours. Lastly, he is working in a non profit organistaion which take care of abondoned pet animals.
All of these actions shows that he cares a lot about community and he working to make it better. I believe he should be awarded with atleast Rs. 20000 for his self less work, that he has been doing from many years. This award will not only motivate him further but also will encourage others to work like him.
Your Faithfully,
Harpal Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to, your initiative to offer award to peop...
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Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...is a deserving candidate of this award. Since, he has been helping in various ways fr...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'bring'.
Suggestion: bring
...each cleaning drives. These initiatives brings a lot many people together and with his...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, lastly, so, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.875 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52470081971 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6240954962 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4545454545 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181615573004 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707451759315 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972055243279 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136371544437 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114591521375 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.