Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to suggest a person who really deserves the award given by the Thanh Nien newspaper for helping local communities.
I would like to nominate my next-door neighbor, steve Trevor, to take this award. he has lived in the Bau Cat neighborhood for 27 years and he is also my best friend. I would say that this guy is very friendly and contributive to our local community.
About his contribution, steve picks up garbage every early morning while doing exercises with me and that is why everyone in the neighborhood always finds the streets very clean. Furthermore, he even tries to separate recylable items from garbage and put them in the right place. Therefore, I totally believe that he is the hero of our local environment.
As for the award, since this guy lives a simple life and has never asked for anything much, I suppose a brief article in the newspaper to honor his name will be the best reward for him. If possible, a small amount of money will also be a good reward for his actions.
I hope you would take my suggestion into consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...hbor, steve Trevor, to take this award. he has lived in the Bau Cat neighborhood f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, therefore, while, as for, i suppose
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7461928934 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66878625169 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0046485352 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201487161694 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702330735709 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884184929626 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115797615145 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120752504738 0.0580467560999 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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