Your local newspaper want to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community. Write a Letter to the newspaper. In your letter
. Suggest someone who deserves the reward.
. Mention what they have done to help the community.
. Say what reward you want like to give this person.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regards to the article published on 2th march in local newspaper about people who have done extra ordinary services for their community and they should be rewarded for that.
My brother friend name amit who started a shelter for old age people whose children don't want keep their old parents with them, also those who left their parents back and settle in abroad. He takes care of them like their own parents. He left his job so that he can devote much more time for their welfare.
I want you to mention one article on him and his shelter home for od people in your newspaper, so that more and more people will come to know about his contribution towards the society and this way may be he will get more funding so that he can provide more place to other old age people.
I hope you will consider my request and publish an article about this.
Your Sincerely,
Jasmine
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regards to the article published on 2th march in l...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...elter for old age people whose children dont want keep their old parents with them, ...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...bution towards the society and this way may be he will get more funding so that he can...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... article about this. Your Sincerely, Jasmine
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52976190476 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06929796009 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.1231355107 44.8134815571 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.714285714 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172499368974 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727675708318 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764550200206 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100830390132 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874030640557 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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