Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.Write a letter to the newspaper.In your letter: suggest someone who deserves the reward.mention what they have done to help the community.say what reward you would like to give this person.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a citizen of Tehran living on Farhang Street. I am writing a solicitation letter about the reward you intend to give to responsible people in the community.
I know a group of people who have formed a group together. These people have big responsibilities in famous companies.
The group travels to remote villages and helps needy people, especially widows who are head of households.They offer all the essentials of life such as housing, food, medicine. They even bear the costs of these families' surgical operations.You know when a woman is financially supported. They do not go for profitable people. And as a result, immoral relationships in society will decline.These people had no religious or racial bias when they helped, which makes them more valuable.
I suggest you give this group a prize and it is best to make a statue of these people and install them in one of the city parks. This will make sure that the services they provide are never forgotten and people follow them.If you could also select this group in your list, we would be very grateful. Thank you so much,
I look forward to hearing for you as soon as possible
Yours faithfully,
Daniali
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, such as, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94660194175 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8244460559 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655339805825 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.124620829 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6363636364 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211826221959 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744290593292 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057295184835 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101906230654 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484778179132 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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