Many people support use of animals for testing medicines for humans.Others believe it is not appropriate to use animals for such experiments.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The adoption of a drug for sale in the consumer market can be a daunting process. Some people say that the use of animals in medical tests is unimpeded. But others disagree.I will state my views on both ideas in the following paragraphs.
There are people who believe that animals have equal rights with humans. And laws must be passed to prevent animals from being used in such experiments.This way they can take care of the animals more.These people say that horrible acts are on animals. For example, mice are injected with drugs to find out if they are insomnia or to cultivate cancer cells in their bodies to know what the visual symptoms are.All these brutal acts cause terrible animal deaths.
Nonetheless,if a drug is made available to the public without testing, it will pose a serious risk to society.They explain that there is not much difference between killing an animal for food and using it as an experiment.Because in both cases the survival of the human race is the goal.In addition, when an animal is killed, it gives life to many people. So the experiment on animals is fine.On the other hand, these tests have advanced medical science, and all the unknowns have declined over the years.
In conclusion,I believe that it is true that animal testing should be approved for the approval of a drug, which is an essential step in confirming the potency of a drug, but it should at least impose animal suffering.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nonetheless, so, at least, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81451612903 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67868217402 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608870967742 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.425325769 49.4020404114 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.666666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339922949546 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133408299646 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565007629355 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201414361844 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290404274635 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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