Dear Sir/Madam,
I read in last weekend editions of Manila Bulletin Newspaper that you wanted to reward people who have made a great contributions to the society. I would like to include my mother Mrs. Rosemary Tadaya who deserves to be part of this reward.
My mother is a government employee in Manila City Hall for almost 40 years now. When she has free time, she spend time with the homeless or poor people on the street to offer some food to eat and clean clothes to wear. Moreover, she is active in donating to charities who reaching out to street children in the Philippines over the years. She is a hopeless animal lover who rescued so many stray dogs and cats providing them foods and shelter to live. In addition, my mother also participate in environmental volunteering, such as organize cleanup campaign, recycling waste products and planting trees.
I recommend to give a plaque of recognition for her good deeds, as it will give her a great appreciation.
Thank you for your time and I'm looking forward to seeing positive response.
Sincerely yours,
Fergie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'contribution'?
Suggestion: contribution
... to reward people who have made a great contributions to the society. I would like to include...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'spends'.
Suggestion: spends
... years now. When she has free time, she spend time with the homeless or poor people o...
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Line 9, column 29, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ciation. Thank you for your time and Im looking forward to seeing positive resp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88108108108 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70488560495 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702702702703 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8262912149 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0909090909 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147281312396 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494341274446 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743013694213 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865194783812 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103305781128 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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