Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
suggest someone who deserves the reward.
mention what they have done to help the community.
say what reward you would like to give this person.
Dear sir,
Subject : Regarding, reward people who do social services.
This is Aslam from Sydney. Since last twenty five years, I have been living in this place. As per knowledge, the person named Mr. Zainul Abideen who is living in my place and whom I want to recommend for the reward.
He is performing many social activities such as blood donation camp, orphan care, old ages home etc,. He is a well known person and doing these type of activities for the last thirty years.
Apart from these, he wrote many books and did many lectures which is very useful for the community to lead in a decent life and a good habit as well. He is serving to the social community in day and night with smiling face.
I suggest Mr. Zainul Abideen, who is eligible for the reward. I would like to give him a good car and in proportion. The car might be very useful for his service to move from one place to other. Though he does not have any transport to do the social activities.
Hope, I suggest a right person.
Yours truly,
Mohammed Aslam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ion camp, orphan care, old ages home etc,. He is a well known person and doing the...
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Line 10, column 196, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ervice to move from one place to other. Though he does not have any transport to do th...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'regarding', 'so', 'well', 'apart from', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24537037037 0.220444632235 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.152777777778 0.167888034529 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101851851852 0.0606518309736 168% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.0506257000042 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0648148148148 0.118615021944 55% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0925925925926 0.107062808482 86% => OK
Participles: 0.037037037037 0.041066498444 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.22961666721 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0324074074074 0.0385302599488 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0833333333333 0.0714148451538 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00925925925926 0.0191574576366 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0231481481481 0.00930345855455 249% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1043.0 1141.60824742 91% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.134020619 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46073298429 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78085437643 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.282722513089 0.284621296913 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.146596858639 0.211203875043 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0890052356021 0.133321485273 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0628272251309 0.0843313296314 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22961666721 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623036649215 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 60.8920551022 62.8969750728 97% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 12.9587628866 108% => OK
Sentence length: 13.6428571429 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6540775951 44.7399317507 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 90.9928171075 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6428571429 16.4300151701 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.613754768223 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 28.3025430067 37.5504026743 75% => OK
Elegance: 1.47272727273 1.13073093955 130% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298547786473 0.331212695627 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0944471582389 0.0927372745006 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0795473646209 0.0736520305886 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.638090437708 0.579516596996 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.208844384128 0.180689518051 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109116032688 0.122183219658 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849536039466 0.0765303033291 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.165197469425 0.211926503985 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.112233659469 0.0737400523855 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153938655847 0.203819188451 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103032890383 0.067151250289 153% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.45360824742 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 4.73195876289 211% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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