Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to recommend Muskaan-The NGO for your recognition initiative. I firmly believe that this NGO’s initiative to deliver the leftover food from events to needy deserves an acknowledgement from society. I hope you will agree with me.
Let me explain you their contributions to the society in detail. In the last six months, they have successfully completed more than 100 food drives, which are intended to provide the food to the people who can not meet this basic need. Event organizers are informed in advance to contact the organization immediately in case food is left after the event, which in most of the events does. The team picks up the food before it gets spoiled and distributes to the poor people in society. This creates a win-win situation for all as the food does not get wasted and needy gets food.
I believe their works deserve recognition more than anything. This will also help them to reach out to more event organizers and in turn help more people.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93922651934 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74485013301 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0787608399 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976724366393 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417471395537 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393519605518 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571062340564 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100899272967 0.0580467560999 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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