Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others disagree. Do you agree or disagree?
Today the number of sports activities are increased. The dangerous sports activities should be removed is a debatable topic. I shall explain the each side of pros and cons in this essay and completely agree that dangerous sports should be banned.
On one hand, first, the sports activities are for the entertainment purpose. Second, it improves the physical health. It is a best activity for the human life to maintain our body in a good condition. Playing the safe sports are very good for the society and for the individual too. But people are concentrating only on the entertainment not the safety side. For example, the sports like WWF is a very dangerous sport, which can cause our life.
On the other hand, people are not taking the sports as a entertainment and it is just a game. Rather, they are taking it as a life and making bet between the countries and changing that into gambling. Like, the cricket in India, when there was a match between India and pakistan, definitely there will be police protection, while the final match is going on. Because so many people done bet on India or Pakistan. Which ever country wins, definitely there will be a fight.
Taking these point into consideration, in my personal perspective, without a shadow of doubt, I conclude that dangerous sports should be banned to save the precious life of the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nd, people are not taking the sports as a entertainment and it is just a game. Ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6779190875 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551282051282 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.142656203 50.4703680194 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.25397266985 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255795538328 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823143771234 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718182405124 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156835022679 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637335388164 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 12.6369458128 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.1260098522 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.9458128079 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.5310837438 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.32886699507 87% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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