Dear Ms. Jacqueline,
My name is Diva, and I stay next to your door. We have been living here for more than 8 years now, and we never faced any issues with the tenants living beside us. I’m writing this letter to bring to your attention about the pet dog, Ruby which is at your house.
I live along with my parents, and sisters. My elderly parents are getting disturbed while they fall asleep whenever the Ruby, which is at your garden barks and my younger sisters are not able to concentrate on their studies because of noise coming from your home. They have their final semester in a couple of months from now, and they do not want to get distracted at this moment.
I would request you that you could allow Rumy to stay inside the house during the evening and night times. If possible, please serve it healthy food during night times so that it doesn’t disturb us.
I hope you will address this issue soon.
Yours sincerely,
Diva Robertson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60693641618 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13582055106 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705202312139 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1129542436 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251020244524 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0970977940971 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124602622588 0.0603063233224 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924055413171 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999037161115 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.