Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter•explain the reasons for the noise•apologise•describe what action you will take

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to apologise for the disturbance caused due to the plumbing work being carried out in my apartment.

The problem aroused because of the leakage in the side wall of my flat's bathroom. Initially, it was just water flowing out of the wall but day before yesterday, the pipe burst, and the bathroom was flooded with water. The wall was dig by the plumber in order to detect the exact point of leakage. The activity was carried out late in the night as we wanted the repair work to be completed as soon as possible.

I realized the fact that the repair work might have been a source of disruption to you as it was performed in the late hours of the day and I sincerely apologize for it. The issue has cause trouble to my family as well as we are five members and there is only one rest room available for use.

I will request the plumbing service to rectify the issue as soon as possible by increasing the work force so that the repair repair work can be completed in minimal duration.

Kindly accept my sincere apology.

Yours sincerely,
Shazia Iqbal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: repair
...y increasing the work force so that the repair repair work can be completed in minimal durati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.525 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35303527385 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.1548543763 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853359296105 0.216113520407 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376093354045 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519040884532 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0335228209753 0.12726935374 26% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320485665367 0.0580467560999 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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