You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened. Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it. Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that my suitcase was missed placed when I was traveling to Karachi via flight number PK378 which took off from Islamabad airport at 10:30 AM on May 7, 2019.
As soon as, I received my boarding pass, I submitted my suitcase to the cargo department. when the flight landed in Karachi, I searched for my luggage everywhere, but it was nowhere to be found. I went to the airline counter to file a complaint of my message suitcase and I was assured that the lost and found department will contact me within 5 days, but I have not heard from them up till now.
It was a black leather suitcase of medium size with two buckles on the front side and a logo on the top left corner of the brand named as ‘Michael Clarke’. It was in new condition and had some important confidential office documents, a wristwatch of Casio, few clothes, passport drive and my iPad.
It is requested to kindly take up the matter on priority as I am in distress because of the office documents that were present in the bag. Please let me know what measures having taken so far and when I will be able to get my suitcase back.
I am waiting for a prompt response from your end.
Regards,
Shazia Iqbal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ed my suitcase to the cargo department. when the flight landed in Karachi, I searche...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...clothes, passport drive and my iPad. It is requested to kindly take up the matt...
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Line 13, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ompt response from your end. Regards, Shazia Iqbal
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48908296943 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57565675936 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3064318922 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209520825242 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676966479978 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055122786545 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102230582166 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316065824064 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.