Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houselflat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal,
Good morning,
I have recently received your complain letter about very loudly sound that's coming from my flat these days. As you may already know before, I have had water leakage on the kitchen and bathroom pipes. Therefore, I contacted a plumper team to fix this issue badly. However, as this issue is extremely urgent and important, they are working intensively to complete it as soon as possible.
Thus, I really would like to apologise about this temporary situation but honestly, I have no other choices, except solving this problem immediately. Since, if I ignore this issue, it will definitely effect on the water ciruclation of the whole buliding later on, or in the most worsen situation, it might cause an electrical fire.
Anyhow, I would like to promise you to hire one more plumper team in order to accelerate their performance. Moreover, I will tell them to start their working after you leaving your homes.
Finally, please accept my sincere apologise for this short-term condition.
Best regards
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Ahamad
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, I have...
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Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jamal
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, I have recently rec...
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Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, I have recently received...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Mr.Ahamad and Mr.Jamal, Good morning, I have recently received your complain l...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...complain letter about very loudly sound thats coming from my flat these days. As you ...
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Line 5, column 201, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...I ignore this issue, it will definitely effect on the water ciruclation of the whole b...
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Line 5, column 333, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion, it might cause an electrical fire. Anyhow, I would like to promise you to h...
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Line 7, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r working after you leaving your homes. Finally, please accept my sincere apolog...
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Line 9, column 76, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pologise for this short-term condition. Best regards Bilal
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Line 13, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt-term condition. Best regards Bilal
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Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dition. Best regards Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, honestly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19075144509 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62585575518 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.728323699422 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7231888652 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.9 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174422900483 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562281486801 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686127879144 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0754261313821 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695739705975 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.