Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr Jones,
Yesterday I obtained your letter of complaint about the noise from my house. The sound of music was admittedly excessively loud, but there are some reasons for it.
My wife prepared various dishes, because my daughter were celebrating her eighteenth birthday that day. We were going to do it in the circle of relatives and friends. However, she managed to convince both me and my wife to leave home for five hours, so that she could invite her classmates for her small party. We agreed to her, since it was her maturity and wanted to do something special for her.
Nevertheless, according to my child, her company soon got bored, so they made a decision to bring powerful speakers from their college. Therefore, while we were spending time in another place, they enabled the music center, which created so much roaring. It would, of course, be forbidden to do it, if I had been initially aware of their decision.
In this letter, I would like to bring my apologize to you for causing so much inconvenience that evening. In addition, I promise you to better check my daughter on such occasions. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know by phoning on the following number 87001444413.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enter, which created so much roaring. It would, of course, be forbidden to do it,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in addition, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84862385321 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63360285247 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674311926606 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4901447784 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143009796468 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602397646154 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074965332532 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944026638169 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0866481046711 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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