Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
DEAR TOM,family:"Times New Roman","serif"; mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New Roman"">
I RECEIVED YOUR LETTER YESTERDAY AND was ASHAMED TO KNOW ABOUT THE disturbances CAUSED BY us
LAST WEEK FEW GUESTS WERE STAYING AT OUR PLACE AS THERE WERE some family GATHERINGS PLANNED IN THE CITY.THEY HAD VISITED us ALMOST AFTER TEN YEARS AND it was CELEBRATION TIME SO THE NOISE LEVEL JUST WENT OUT OF THE BLUE.
I understand that my ENJOYMENT SHOULDN’T HAMPER PEOPLE IN my VICINITY. I should have TRIED TO CONTROLTHE ENVIROMENT OR should have MADE some OTHER CONSIDERABLE arrangements FOR it.I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR such A disturbing ACT.I understand that it MUST have BEEN A TROUBLESOME situation FOR YOU AND YOUR family.
I PROMISE NOT TO REPEAT any such KIND OF SHAMEFUL ACTS IN THE NEAR future. I WILL MAKE PRIOR arrangements AND CONSIDRERABLE MEASURES IN future FOR any such situation. I APOLOGISE FOR THE SAME.HOPING THAT YOU WILL FORGIVE ME FOR THE SAME.
YOURS LOVINGLY
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , family
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... OTHER CONSIDERABLE arrangements FOR it.I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR such A disturb...
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Line 13, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... OTHER CONSIDERABLE arrangements FOR it.I AM REALLY VERY SORRY FOR such A disturb...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...LY VERY SORRY FOR such A disturbing ACT.I understand that it MUST have BEEN A TRO...
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Line 13, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...LY VERY SORRY FOR such A disturbing ACT.I understand that it MUST have BEEN A TRO...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...situation FOR YOU AND YOUR family. I PROMISE NOT TO REPEAT any such KIND OF ...
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Line 17, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ND OF SHAMEFUL ACTS IN THE NEAR future. I WILL MAKE PRIOR arrangements AND CONSID...
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Line 17, column 168, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...SURES IN future FOR any such situation. I APOLOGISE FOR THE SAME.HOPING THAT YOU ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... FOR THE SAME. YOURS LOVINGLY
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60377358491 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.51946202158 2.54303337028 178% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.710691823899 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.898582882 44.8134815571 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.5 76.5299724578 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181033315894 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100397858976 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976456265966 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879016660934 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715017646313 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 70.7449484536 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 7.45979381443 196% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.