Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Jones,
I am writing to apologise for the noise last week. I am most embarrassed about this. Because me and my family are normally quiet people and we do respect the privacy of my neighbours.
The reason for the excessive noise was that it was my 45th birthday party and my family threw a surprise party for me. They had invited around 10 of my friends with their children to celebrate my birthday party and perhaps they did not realise how much noise would be made by all of the children. I would also explain that after i had over the shock, i thought to apologise to my neighbours for noise and high-level music after the party. Unfortunately, the time was late and i would not disturb them again.
Once again, please accept my apologies and rest assured that this situation will not be repeated. I have since personally apologised to my neighbours, who were all very understanding.
Yours sincerely,
Omer Otcu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...realise how much noise would be made by all of the children. I would also explain that aft...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ildren. I would also explain that after i had over the shock, i thought to apolog...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...xplain that after i had over the shock, i thought to apologise to my neighbours f...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y. Unfortunately, the time was late and i would not disturb them again. Once a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7256097561 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63563502423 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8384534399 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14877637848 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629010516808 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565238459984 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763840679005 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233378639883 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.