Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night.
Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter
Your reason for writing
What you would like to happe
A nice, respectful style
Dear Mr Brown,
I hope you are doing great. It has always been a nice experience living here next to your house.
I am writing to tell you about frustration on your dog, who barks all over the day and night. The noise of pet is irritating which disturbs me a lot. whenever I start studying, dog starts barking which distracts my mind and due to this, I am not able to concentrate on my academic activities. Additionally, I am not able to listen to my favourite songs and enjoy them.
I would like to ask you to stop it by taking care of your dog. You can feed him on time so that it will bar him to make annoying noise. Moreover, you can keep your pet in a closed room which will bar him disturbing neighbours.
I hope that I am not disturbing you but it was necessary to tell you about this irritating experience. If you would like to discuss it further, feel free to contact me at your convenience. We can resolve this matter smoothly and conveniently.
Thank you take care.
Yours Sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whenever
... is irritating which disturbs me a lot. whenever I start studying, dog starts barking wh...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42553191489 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62606549976 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9387149318 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.4285714286 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253692040571 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930106626349 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089405093586 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125370962961 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430984001463 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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