You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.
In your letter, you should tell:
-why your ride a bicycle to work
-what the problem is with the parking
-what your suggestions are
Dear Sir,
I hope you will find this letter in the best of health and happiness. Recently, I bought a bicycle to go on my daily route to work at the Gypsy Cafe in the central town. However, I am facing issues to park my bicycle because of the non-availability of parking near the cafe.
There were two purposes for buying the bicycle. Firstly, it was expensive for me to board on public transport facility on a daily basis. Plus, I would not be able to afford an automobile because my finances do not allow me to buy an automobile. Another benefit that I got after buying a pedal cycle is that I have lost a good amount of belly fat and become physically fit and healthy.
However, to my concerns, every evening around 5 pm, I am not able to park my bicycle at the nearest available spots to the cafe because of its higher occupancy. Due to this, I have to find and search the space available on the different streets in the central town which consumes more time and convenient spaces of parking.
Since it is causing daily trouble of consuming my time on work, I would suggest constructing a few more extra spots for parking bicycles in the parking area. If you will take my suggestion, not only I will be earning a benefit, but also the locals of the town will find it easy to park their cycles.
I hope you will consider in taking my suggestion to the concerns of parking bicycles in the town.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 265.0 206.0 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47924528302 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55690383256 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.0 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7588887014 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190014015588 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718165346385 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673175418777 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119090293379 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782479675224 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.