There is no doubt that the internet has become a hub of all information that person is looking for any subject matter. I completely agree with the statement.
The most significant advantage of the cyberspace is that anybody can access data from any location at any time without waiting for extended hours. As it is globally connected with multiple computers to fetch data for the users, provided each network should consist of a unique identification number. For instance, customers can easily book flight tickets online with the help of the internet without standing in a serpentine queue for long hours. In contrast, if it had not introduced globally decades ago, we would have still working manually to get the things done.
Furthermore, the internet is a vast source of information. We can easily find all subjects of matter at one browser, unlike the book where we need to buy several copies for a different subject matter. For instance, Google is a browser where a user can find any data related to various topics. Most of the business is heavily dependent on the internet to run it efficiently. Sometimes, in the absence of net, it becomes an arduous job for a business person to run the business without a halt.
To sum up the essay, no doubt the internet is a vital source to upgrade the knowledge of a person . Multiple users from multiple locations simultaneously can use it. However, it has some limitations too that we should take into account like in the absence of electricity or power no internet works.
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...city or power no internet works.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, for instance, in contrast, no doubt, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94318181818 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77750199503 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4546433588 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2142857143 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666390331359 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291116035545 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362445042022 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0415873096516 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00445538399891 0.056905535591 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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