Your recently had your computer fixed at a local computer store. However, you are not pleased with the service you received.
Describe the situation
Explain why you are dissatisfied
Say what you want the manager to do
Dear manager,
I am writing a letter to you."Because" l should complain about your stuff member. Recently,I had fixed a laptop of Dell company.when, l was fixed a laptop that time your staff member said to me," There are many other things with computer."Because" that days this company gives better offer. Like mouse,hard disk, Carry bag and pendrive.
On the other hand, I bring down there.I feel dissatisfied your service. For the reason that,they did not give proper things.which you did offer me. After that, I talked to with your employes. But, they did not satisfy to me. Also, they did not well response. I feel very bad experience."Because" they gives only mouse and carry bag when I did talked about that matter. They said,"stock is not available in time. Beside, I want to discuss with you. In that situation, I want to all material fastly. If you will not be given the offer material. Please you refund my money or change the laptop. As well l select that company product. Because they give the many offers. So I will be thankful to you
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...mplain about your stuff member. Recently,I had fixed a laptop of Dell company.when...
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Line 2, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
...p that time your staff member said to me,' There are many other things with compu...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , hard
...s company gives better offer. Like mouse,hard disk, Carry bag and pendrive. On the o...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... On the other hand, I bring down there.I feel dissatisfied your service. For the...
^
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...isfied your service. For the reason that,they did not give proper things.which you di...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...bad experience.'Because' they gives only mouse and carry bag when I did tal...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'talk'
Suggestion: talk
...ves only mouse and carry bag when I did talked about that matter. They said,'stoc...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
... did talked about that matter. They said,'stock is not available in time. Beside,...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tuation, I want to all material fastly. If you will not be given the offer materia...
^^
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...u refund my money or change the laptop. As well l select that company product. Bec...
^^
Line 3, column 646, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... As well l select that company product. Because they give the many offers. So I will be...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95698924731 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.77808211896 2.54303337028 149% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6368581681 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.2352941176 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.9411764706 16.8248392259 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94117647059 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208815170867 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771414884724 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844797499258 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157735714356 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335055213185 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.3 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.