Write a letter to your manager to nominate a person for best employee of the year award.
Who is this person
Why did you choose him?
What are the characteristic of a good employee.
Dear manager,
My name is John. I am writing a letter to you." Because" l should focus your mind some issue." As you know, Our insurance company did nominate a person for best employee of the year.which did worked hard and across the lavel of the policy every year. So today I am recommending our company employee for yearly award. That person is Mr. Mohan lal. He is very old worker in company. He is very intelligent and honest person. He is doing hard work before many years. Why i choose that person? For reason that, Firstly, I am senior officer in company. Secondly, I deal with many person everyday so, I saw everyone employee in office. which person is working hard and give the much more frofit to our company. As you know, My company had declared a level of policies. Beside, that person had across the lavel of policies. I think that person does recommend for yearly award. I am request to you.please you give the yearly award that person. I will be really thankful to you
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 439, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... is very intelligent and honest person. He is doing hard work before many years. W...
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Line 2, column 484, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... doing hard work before many years. Why i choose that person? For reason that, Fi...
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Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
... so, I saw everyone employee in office. which person is working hard and give the muc...
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Line 2, column 952, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... you give the yearly award that person. I will be really thankful to you Yours s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, really, second, secondly, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62430939227 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52431175022 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.4356025046 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.3125 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.3125 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9375 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301794143867 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900149114707 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831283441748 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296504830275 0.12726935374 233% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.33 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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