Your sibling has sent you a letter asking for an update on your life.
Write a letter to your sibling. In your letter:
– Describe what you did for your last birthday
– Ask for photos of your sibling’s last holiday
– Talk about something you are looking forward to
Hello Rita,
Thanks for your letter for asking my wellness but i apologize for not written to you since long time. Recently, I have joined a new company as senior manager due to which i am not finding time for myself even but now things are on track.
As you are very much interested to know about my last birthday party, well you will be surprised to know, my friends had given me surprise party on world tallest and iconic building 'Burj Khalia'. We were group of ten and had finger licking dinner in ''Armani Hotel' which is located on the 124th level of this skyscrapper.
By the way, how about your visit to paris? you had told me about it during our last phone call. I am sure, you must had enjoyed the steets, food and pictrique view of paris. Don't forget to share lovely photos of your holidays.
well, as you know now, i have got new job and obviously on better salary pacakage. I am planning to buy new car 'Ford Mustang' as its my dream and crush from my childhood. I would go with Red color and black color interior with alloy wheel. On you next arrival, you will get chance a chance to drive it for sure.
That's all from my side right now, i am eagerly waiting for your reply with photos.
Best Wishes,
Singh
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-10-05 | Daxesh | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-17 | Singh009 | 77 | view |
| 2019-06-17 | Gunjan Pratap | 47 | view |
| 2019-06-17 | lalatheghillli | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... your letter for asking my wellness but i apologize for not written to you since ...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... company as senior manager due to which i am not finding time for myself even but...
^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...the way, how about your visit to paris? you had told me about it during our last ph...
^^^
Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...eets, food and pictrique view of paris. Dont forget to share lovely photos of your h...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
...share lovely photos of your holidays. well, as you know now, i have got new job an...
^^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...planning to buy new car Ford Mustang as its my dream and crush from my childhood. I...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... chance a chance to drive it for sure. Thats all from my side right now, i am eagerl...
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Line 6, column 35, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ure. Thats all from my side right now, i am eagerly waiting for your reply with ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, well, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29437229437 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06954480155 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7730723036 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301965978699 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969017234391 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995870345287 0.0603063233224 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166196640089 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819152163328 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.