Your sibling has sent you a letter asking for an update on your life.
Write a letter to your sibling. In your letter:
– Describe what you did for your last birthday
– Ask for photos of your sibling’s last holiday
– Talk about something you are looking forward to
Dear John,
Thank you for your lovely letter. It was so nice to hear from you.
As for me, I was out for my Birthday last: five of us went to Golden rain casino to play poker, and we stayed out late at cocktail bar. The Game was good, the drinks were many, and I had to take the next day off work with the world’s biggest hangover. I swear they get worse every year.
I’ll be going to India for couple weeks of next month, though, that’ll be good. That reminds me; send me those photos from your holiday, that one to Mumbai, when you went to all those Music festivals - that sounded like the best time when you told me about it.
I’m looking forward to getting engaged with the Rosy after coming back from India. I want to get some advice from you, as I remember how you proposed the Elina on her birthday. Also, I want you to be my best man, give me a shout ASAP.
Best wishes,
Daniel Craig,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: CONFUSION_OF_OUR_OUT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'our'?
Suggestion: our
...ain casino to play poker, and we stayed out late at cocktail bar. The Game was good...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25142857143 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.85335300344 2.54303337028 73% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702857142857 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1495950575 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.6363636364 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242842151212 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840584447674 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105382494907 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167619218886 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108493283504 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.07 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.