The zoo manager wrote you and asked you some question about your trip. Reply him on some answers:
• Feed back about the trip
• Give some advice to help the zoo improve
Dear Madam,
I was really surprised when I received your letter in which you considered customers’ attitude about services of the zoo and would like to know how to raise quality of some services. In this letter, I am expressing my feelings about the zoo and giving some advice for you.
First of all, the zoo was arranged scientifically. Wildlife animals were placed in a separate area which had numerous huge trees; hence, visitors found this place like the forest. In addition, all introduction boards were quite detailed, so people could find out where they wanted to visit easily. Especially, the price of all services is reasonable; for example, we had to pay only five dollars for each ticket while that of other zoos costs at least ten dollars.
On the other hand, we were annoyed by the noise from an entertainment area which destroyed the peace of the surrounding natural habitat. Besides, there was a lot of litter thrown away indiscriminately which made tourists feel uncomfortable.
With my above comments, to attract more visitors, you should replace some games which generate big noise into separate zone. You should also place more rubbish -bins and remind visitors to keep the environment clean.
I hope that your zoo becomes more and more attractive.
Yours faithfully,
Kendy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Madam, I was really surprised when I received y...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, hence, if, really, so, while, at least, for example, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08372093023 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7769662176 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688372093023 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8982573332 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0833333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 4.34317383033 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210190233592 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773956779273 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951137139867 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112902107242 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116076049613 0.0580467560999 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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