Nowadays people normally stretch their work hours and get stressed than before. What are the reasons for this? What employers can do to make people’s life easier?
Today, usually workers extend their working time beyond the conventional time period. This, in turn, creates negative side effects to the employees, both mentally and physically. Let me examine the reasons for this stress at work place, and provide some measures that employers could take in order to change the existing lifestyle of the employees into a happier one.
To begin with, one of the major reasons, which makes working-class people to fall into a stressful life, is due to the heavy pressure given from the employers’ side to finish the project on time. However, another reason is that...
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