( re write) Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Indubitably, language plays a very pivotal role to represent culture and identification of the nation. Several countries have their own traditional languages. However, today because of globalization and advancement in technology many indigenous languages are endangered and ready to extinct. Certain people deem it is worthwhile to enhance couple of languages exclusively to ease life. But, I have some mixed opinion regarding this statement.
Evidently, the world has drastically dominated with the adaptation of distinct languages such as English, French and Spanish. Furthermore, tourism, trad...
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tourism, trade and education, vividly influenced by these foreign languages.
tourism, trade and education, are vividly influenced by these foreign languages.
which is profoundly affiliate with language
which is profoundly affiliated with language
Sentence: On the contrary, if we are appreciating and aping the other foreign linguistic constantly then, eventually we loss of cultural rules, ancient history, patriotic feeling and numerous useful aspects of life.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to we and loss
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
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