Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by government rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and provide relevant examples from your own experience.
Decreasing threatening environmental issues is the hot debate nowadays globally. International Global Summit is happening every year to discuss about implementing government policies to negate the effects of these issues. However, I opine that though government makes every possible effort to fight these problems, it is in people’s hand to effectively handle these issues.
At the outset, from government point of view, the possible efforts to decrease the impact of environmental issues are considered. First and foremost, global warming is the significant threat to the environment due to the ...
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people must obey policies of the government and learn to respect it.
Description: 'it' refers to what? Be sensitive to use pronouns.
Sentence: Nevertheless, from people point of view, people decide the government, hence, they can be the decisive factor in controlling this issue worldwide.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to people and point
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